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Vintage Years Copyright © Richard J Whiting 2011
Barley tops blush,
Thinned by drought.
A cruel winter mocked
By wild daisies
More beautiful than snow.
Lines of poppies
Head and shoulders above the corn
Divide the fields,
Challenge the sunset,
Riot in the verges.
I capture them in High Definition;
Losing the smell of the grass,
The chiff-chaff’s call,
The run of a fox.
Weak as paper,
Svelte as silk
Weathered flags
On green-haired poles
Singing their song of brevity
To a listening wind.
Trying to trap time,
I fill a vase,
The best year for poppies
Says the radio
For almost a hundred years.
Not a half-hour picked
Heads hang low,
Slide into the water;
Drowned corpses,
Beyond resurrection.
One I save.
In the pages of a book,
Pressed by poets;
A reminder of those
Who blazed so red,
Died so young
A century past;
The vintage crop,
The downed corpses,
Of Ypres and Passchenndaele.
Comments
I like the way that the acute
I like the way that the acute observation of the poppy and its short life once cut leads into reflections about the war which gave poppies their extra significance. 'Weak as paper' is a particularly interesting line in this context.