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Willow by Roy Everitt

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Willow Copyright © Roy Everitt 2009

Around the widowed willow swept
confetti-like, a veil of white
and over crumpled carpet crept
soft-footed as the morning light

a mourning fox, his head held low
against the falling sky. He knew,
at once unlike the ways we know,
how bitter willow is to chew.

Read Where: 
Poetry Aloud, Benson Blakes, Bury St Edmunds
Read When: 
Tue, 26/01/2010
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I really like the sounds in this, the vowel sounds as well as the alliteration and internal rhyme which create the mood. SW